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Don't tell me what you think I want to hear,
just tell me what really is in your heart.
I don't want to hear things that aren't true,
but tell me things that are real and good.
This is truly what I want to hear from you.

Don't show me what you think I want to see,
for what you are showing has no reality to it.
Don't jive me with illusions you know are fake,
but let me see what you really have to offer.
This is truly what I want to see from you.

Don't tell me "sweet little lies" in my face,
for lies are never truly sweet, but sour.
Just tell my what your heart truly feels for me,
that is what I must ask you to be faithful in.
This is truly what I want to hear from you.

Don't deceive me with sights that are unreal,
but show me what truly lays withing your heart.
To deceive is to destroy everything about us,
and I want to see what you really are about.
This is truly what I want to see from you.

Don't tell me lies and claim they are truth.
Don't show me falsehoods and claim they are real.
Only then can I trust you with my love and care.

--RKJ
A person imploring their intended to be truthful.
--RKJ
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XIStormIX Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013   Digital Artist
This is very nice, Robert.  Great writing.  So good to see you again.  :D
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Mez3rika Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist
I love the way it flows with logic and honesty, it makes a great poem. Lovely. :hug:
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LuXun1986 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate to this poem wholeheartedly. Great poem! ^w^
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TrinitySage Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, this is very well written, and I can see your point on wanting to be told the truth about things from someone you care about.
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